A Candle In Wind Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Candle In Wind

Rating: 4.5


Storm is at the bay
Light is going away
Darkness filled in way
Heart is empty to pay
The last lit of its ray

In its pursuit of gay
Year passed like day
With no words to say
Closed eyes to pray
For the smell of clay

Rain is going to spray
To wet time in gray
Sure for long to stay
With nothing left to slay
Music of pathos on play

There will be no hay
Nor someone’s prey
Only memories of may
And the words of nay
To be part of the lay

Wind left me to stray
With a empty tray
But light said ay
Don’t ever get dismay
Life is not just today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 27 June 2009

nice rhymes good flow of the tongue

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Louis Rams 26 June 2009

the wind and rain is here today, but tommorrow will bring a brighter day. a good write a ten

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 June 2009

'Wind left me to stray With a empty tray But light said ay Don’t ever get dismay Life is not just today' This is an inspirational write friend... but for the moment i d like to live the day.. sometimes thinking too much doesn't gona help either! ! ! ! this is a beautiful write friend 10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

'Wind left me to stray With a empty tray But light said ay Don’t ever get dismay Life is not just today' Marvelous and melodious poem.

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rago rago 26 June 2009

nice flow and beautiful rhyms............

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Hope and light is interconnected and poem also.

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Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

As long as there is LIGHT. there is hope. Light is hope.

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Indira Renganathan 07 July 2009

A poem with perfect rhyming....10+++

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

nice kranthi the tongue literraly runs with the rhyme and poem superb write cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 27 June 2009

Always hope of tomorrow

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