# A Caress Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

nice one, like a senryu

nice and meaningful....

beautiful as it is written..grace

it is ok, you should not have forced the rhyme. the first line, it replaced would definitely make the good poem, better...

Well, this is clearly a senryu poem, samanyan, and it does meet the 5-7-5 syllable count required for this form of poetry. I don't think the poem itself is as expressive as it could be, but it does manage to get it's point across. Carl.

its splendid! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Sam my friend, your words echo what many crave...expressed in the only way a natural poet such as yourself could say......with flare.....very well penned

A sweet caress sure to chase the darkness away. Why to shy way? Why to Deny? Just yearn for it.. Thats all i can say.

yes, it is! ! 10..

its a fact, precisely written