A Child's Scientific Religious Experiment Poem by Chuck Audette

Very nicely done. Pictures and sounds. Nice spacing too. The title adds a lot of dimensions which would have been otherwise missed.

'A muffled plumpf'..... that says so much! ! The sound resonates now as I read those words! Great piece of poetry - mission accomplished Chuck! HG: -) xx

hahahah you have some really interesting and witty poetry! Great job

nice one short, but to the point

Intriguing imaginative read with a superb title. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

This is like Silverstein channeling Poe. It should be accompanied by a drawing of a kid looking into a well with flames shooting out of it and burning his hair off. Very well done.

Your delicious style, coupled with your interesting subjects and your irreverent titles make you a force to contend with and a future addiction. Very charming.

Hey, so it was you watching me dropp my coin in the well: -D Ruth..... another good poem.

Short, impressive and truly fine in content. arya

lol i agree w/ helen...a muffled plump, that has such a weirdly cool sound to it...good use of that term, first time i've heard muffled and plump together..sweet write