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A Cold Conclusion

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Vacant hours increase with excuses
You have so much to do; that’s what you say…
Can’t spare any length of time like you use to do
What’s the inspiration for your new cologne spray?

There is an aggravation that messes with my head
It is an itch of doubt that won’t go away with shampoo
My eternal love for you was declared for all to see
Suddenly, I want to remove my aching blue heart tattoo

The dinner is over cooked and beyond shriveled
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My word this is heavy but so accurately described. I particularly like the stark detail of cold dinner, leaving the domesticity in makes this all the more credible and could be any household. HG; -) xx

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Kizza Michael 04 May 2008

we still hope in the future. nice piece.............

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Kesav Easwaran 02 April 2008

the inspiration... it is only you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

certainly this isn't the conclusion yet.

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Ben Gieske 06 December 2007

Another ten. I could say something about love, but this thought just struck me. So many things have been said about love and we deal with it continuously in all kinds of ways, I wonder if we really know what it is.

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Ralph The Elf 29 June 2012

THIS IS GREAT A COLD CONCLUSION IN DEED...A CONCLUSION WE WOULD RATHER BE IGNORANT OF THAN HAVE KNOWLEDGE OF...POIGNANT WRITE...[APPLAUSE]

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Mehreen Tahir 12 November 2010

A cold conclusion...accepting a fact that we would much rather deny...great composition

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Kee Thampi 21 August 2009

a poem open our heart with a love You arrive without an appetite and go to bed As another day begins the atmosphere is clouded

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008

Amazing composition, enjoyed and added 10.

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Mamta Agarwal 05 July 2008

grief, betrayal, resignation- atmosphee created with nice visual images. please read my poem when love is dead

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