Without you
I'm a rain race
The cloud in the spring
An island in the embrace of the sea
Without you
There is no place
All windows are closed
So gray, the sun's face
After years of chasing
I just got a part
In the red dream of your kiss
The last grace
(2008/8/17)
You have a lovely way with words Nightingale and your poetry sings,10 Lynda xx
Lovely feeligs lovely expressions! ! ! sathya narayana
A very lovely love poem, where feelings can be 'touched' by the reader.10+, of course :)
...a 10 has been given to nightingle of shiraz with joy for this nice composition!
A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly. Such sweet words that softens the hard headed! Thanks for a lovely write.
rain, cloud, island and sea if a poem has one of those it could be good what do you think it a poem has all of those? 8++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very touching and gentle support, just a nightingale can sing a song... 10............. Tsira