A Cry Out Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Cry Out

Rating: 4.7


Oh! Heart of mine!
That has been broken
In so many pieces and many times…
Here I am, wondering
If you can survive this time,
When I am drowning in a valley of tears,
After contemplating the departure
Of another so-called everlasting love….

Oh! My dear heart!
Temple of my sadden life! Here I am, once again,
Walking through a path that leads to nowhere…
Here I am, eating without taste,
Looking for consolation
In the emptiness of loneliness…

Here I am, trying in vain
To hold a love that is gone…
Oh! Heart of mine!
Will you survive next time?


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 31 July 2011

It touched my heart. You are a deep and loving soul.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 November 2010

What else can be more effective and expressive than this? A painful heart has delineated its sorrow in a very rapturous style. You are really flying in your emotions. What a poem! A marvellous write.

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Silver Sky 19 August 2010

Awww that is so touching. what a beautiful expression of pain and hope. i loved it. Great idea, very emotionally wrenching. Loved it.10 ++++

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Richelle Barrameda 23 May 2010

true... how can you indeed live if your heart was broken so many times? This poem makes me think and wonder how indeed...

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Miriam Alencaster 16 May 2010

your really talented

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Amitava Sur 04 October 2013

A poignant write up of loss of love, an irreparable loss, which oozes through those line. excellant

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Chris Blazo 14 August 2012

Very good! I can realte to this as so many others can too. Im pretty sure you'll make it the next time. Good, down to earth write.

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Shining Star 19 December 2011

This is a very good write... Yet so true... Sometimes in life when our heart takes lead it can be devastaing in the end....

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Gary Manning 11 August 2011

Yet agen fantastic I felt that way a few times myself.. I felt this to the soul so it has to have a 10 or 12

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Matthew Petranovich 05 August 2011

I love it. It's so true and thats why some people don't fall to fast but time heals all wounds, even though it leaves scars. p.s. Thank you for commenting on my poem. I never knew a poet so famous would actually write on one of mine. Thanks again

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