A dark moon rising
almost as black as coal
nothing can be done
to save the world
The only way forward
is backwards
I agree. Nothing can be done (by man) to save the world. Perhaps, we need to re-read events, hence a moving backward to be able to inch forward. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Connection with nature like our ancestors did to restore the ecosystem. very meaningful
Hi Dave wonderful poem great read i hope we can save the world
Wisdom is born out of the past, and it is wisdom perhaps that will save the world. Excellent Dave.
Very thought provoking write. So much is pulled in here. A sad ness for current life and a longing to go back to old ways. Loved the write.
Beautiful poem with indepth meaning. Only way forward is looking past backward. Very true. Loved reading it.
what a perfect piece of art. in few words our today's world is defined.... really, who will save this world, who will stay in front of that black moon? nice one.
In the darkness we can go back and reflect on our mistakes and be determined to change for the good of mankind. Beautiful write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very good write, dark moon.