(dedicated to Mr. Eddie Roa, a great poet at poemhunter)
come out of shadows of blackened dreams
my soul soars like a Spring valley's glow
for they are most wise in all centuries
in pride and pleasure of the youth
I thank to beloved God for giving us
our life shall be happy as full moon
only the perfume of the red orchids
surround us with new-strong hopes
on behalf of our friend's devotion
is lost in the light of their rays?
no, never surrender your love
we know how to survive
Good poem Ahmad - - and your last line stays in the mind - - you certainly know how to survive - - with love in your heart to many - - - well written 10 + + + from Fay.
What a blessing this love is for the world may it open many hearts Thanksgreetings from Sneek Boomfriend Ruerd
Very well written and beautifully done. thanks for sharing Michael
Very well written and beautiful imagery. You are very good at presenting your poetic voice. thanks for sharing Michael
I love the first verse its delightful nice work Krista
Dear friend Ahmad, I have mixed emotions for this. I do not deserve an adulation such as a poem dedicated to me. It is an embarassment for there are those in PoemHunter more deserving. Pardon my being a bit dense today but I'm still grappling with end part of the poem. Thanks and I will strive to be more worthy. Eddie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice tribute to a great man