(dedicated to Mr. Eddie Roa, a great poet at poemhunter)
come out of shadows of blackened dreams
my soul soars like a Spring valley's glow
for they are most wise in all centuries
in pride and pleasure of the youth
I thank to beloved God for giving us
our life shall be happy as full moon
only the perfume of the red orchids
surround us with new-strong hopes
on behalf of our friend's devotion
is lost in the light of their rays?
no, never surrender your love
we know how to survive
Beautiful and touching poem
its so nice to see you dedicating poems to your friends on poem hunter.
Survive is a real keyword today.
on behalf of our friend's devotion is lost in the light of their rays? no, never surrender your love we know how to survive --------fantastic lines here...written with great strength and positive outlook in life...10
Very well written and beautifully done. thanks for sharing Michael
Very well written and beautiful imagery. You are very good at presenting your poetic voice. thanks for sharing Michael
I love the first verse its delightful nice work Krista
A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.
Dear friend Ahmad, I have mixed emotions for this. I do not deserve an adulation such as a poem dedicated to me. It is an embarassment for there are those in PoemHunter more deserving. Pardon my being a bit dense today but I'm still grappling with end part of the poem. Thanks and I will strive to be more worthy. Eddie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
So touching and beautiful. Your words and imagination are so much better than mine. Keep it up! ! MIMI