ahmed khaled

A Drop/P/ Of Poetry - Poem by ahmed khaled

a darling of me
came with tears in eyes
white tears as snow
o baby i said
what's the matter
she never replied
but then stood, sat
and did lie
it's my eyes
burn with pain
she sighed
o my lover
only a look i passed
and only a drop
touched her eyes
removing all the burn
and the pain as well
and this is the why
because the darling
was a paper
and that drop
was a drop
of poetry.

Comments about A Drop/P/ Of Poetry by ahmed khaled

  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (10/10/2011 12:52:00 PM)

    Thank you, one of most beautiful drops I've ever seen! Love it, thank you,10. (Report)Reply

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  • Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (10/9/2011 6:06:00 PM)

    You make me want to discover a lot in poetry, i am so going to read more of your work (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (10/7/2011 7:43:00 AM)

    Your poetry just gets better,
    Always makes the reader think,
    This makes the poem have more
    impact. Truly a great write.

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (10/6/2011 8:57:00 PM)

    My comment entitled 'The Love Confession from Ahmed's Heart' a reply for your work
    -Describing how passionate you are in literature :)
    LOL hope you like it Ahmed, i just wrote and it sounds like poem isnt hhahaha
    so if it look weird poem ignore this, hahahaha

    'The Love Confession from Ahmed's Heart'

    Drip Drop of your tears
    The Confession of love
    Saturated feeling
    soluble emotions
    In tears,
    So salty
    As they tell deepest reality
    Of love, In Ahmed's poetry

    The Confession
    His love, His soul
    Flow tears to write a letter
    On secret love paper
    Magical tears will left other words smears
    Only his thought absorbed
    To feel his sensation
    All the loves in his hand
    Of a sad, happy and beauty
    To live in love with poetry forever

    One day i know,
    Ahmed will stop cry and tears will dry
    but saltiness still tasted on the secret paper
    To witness of his confession,
    A deepest way to tell that he is the poetry lover_Unwritten Soul

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  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/6/2011 5:51:00 AM)

    I like this style of poetry sometimes I being familiar with......this's a wonderful poem... The dropp of poetry consecutively comprise in a sea of poetry....great poem (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (10/6/2011 3:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful.Emancipation of unrequited love.Love sometimes seeks oneness in love only.Due to some reasons may be love ends its incriminating bliss.Then is not actually true love.Its calculation.But this poem added flavour to the tea of loss and well appreciated by people who has experienced broken hearts, tears and tissue papers or napkins to throw it away as some bad dreams before or something worthy to be forgotten. (Report)Reply

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  • Hosny Soliman (10/5/2011 9:08:00 PM)

    Dear Ahmed Kahled as usual all your poems inspired me.I can't comment with short comment and go.Every time i stop like some one look, yes look not read.Like some one look to a painting some time be so close another time be a little bit away.Or a musician playing a new melody, he play many times till he get to the point.I look in my mind, read and read till the first dropp of my brianchild birht.Drop after dropp all pool in one page.
    Here's my pool's drops:

    Drops of water, Drops of thought
    When eyes of sky rain
    Each dropp has an angel
    Carry the dropp some where
    Each dropp has a special fate
    When head of sky birth
    Each brainchild has an angel
    Carry the dropp to a brain
    One dropp to write another on to paint
    Each dropp has a special fate
    All what we need is just to pray
    My dear Khaled thanks again i hope to accept to post my pool's drops to my page.

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  • Crimson Love (10/5/2011 7:22:00 PM)

    A magnificent poem, written by a magnificent poet, very well done.. Thanks for sharing ^_^ (Report)Reply

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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/5/2011 5:18:00 PM)

    A dropp of poetry. What could ever flow more freely than creativity? Beautiful writing, brother. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 6, 2011

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