Dark clouds coverd the skies
Heavy rain filled the nights
Beside the stream of unclean water
As a dropped flower I just laid
As if God Had heard my cries
an Angel walked down the skies
soon I felt cared in her palm
when she whispered your mine from now
Tears rolled having a smile
Heart felt chilled like river Nile
By her words of love and care
World seemed to be Divine and new
Days rolled with fun and smile
Entwined we are, and even Angels shied
At times, days filled with silly fights
Yet her lips whispered, never leave me even for a while
Promising I wont, I took her as my life
Even a day I couldn't be without seeing her smile
Happened a day, in seeing the dark skies again
Frightened I just ran to her side
There I stood with my arms wide for her
First time she stepped back and cried
The lips I ever admired much, said
Stay back and leave me alone
We can't make it out, lets give an end
Is what, I heard from her lips last again
No words to speak and no shoulders to cry
Like an unwanted flower
I was dropped again.........
ooh...my sebastine, , what a happy sad written, , surely touches lol when d one love you and leaves you, , , soo sad at the end. d'nt worry i'm here to cry on.
in our lives, there are bloopers.. dont let her stand alone dont let her tears roll down always remember, you have a good heart and am really sure, even if she walks away you had captured her heart..
sad ending, .but the poem is beautiful..the expression is well planned, presented clearly...grace
ouchh...seems i was reading a roller coaster love-affair.. sad and convincing.... described a picture vividly.. a picture of a love's ups and down really convincing...great ideas... thoughts' impressive 10+++
a love story so tragic...beautiful narraton, Sebastine...thanks...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hey beautiful write....so much of ache can be seen in the heart of the guy...life and love cant be chase anyday, anyway..if one leaves means god has planned much better....so be open to life and love too! ..easier said than done....coz heart nevr listen to what the reasoning mind says..........but at times need to! ! .....much true write....