A Healing Kiss Poem by Valsa George

A Healing Kiss

Rating: 4.9


Bearing a crown of thorns
Someone planted a kiss
Scarring my face, the spikes
Pricked deep, letting
A stream of blood down

But,

Like a gush of summer rain
It cooled my smouldering spirits
Slumbered my frayed nerves
And loosened my taut muscles!

Friday, March 29, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: muscles,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The tragedy and the irony well blended so as to sound phenomenal........Valsa......the rarest of rare poems I have ever read..........great piece from a great writer...........

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

The love behind painful words, sometimes becomes a pleasantry. That is how I understood your poem. It's a lovely poem. Well deserved rating of number 10.

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan 24 June 2014

I got the picture of Jesus on the cross? is that what you too had in mind, Ma'am? truly amazing

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Padmanabhan Ananth 04 January 2014

Wow, so well written, short but sweet.

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Amitava Sur 21 October 2013

The love's petals were sprinkled on you with a delicate kiss........ very nice

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

He that wears a crown of thorns often suffers that others not, and when he tried to kiss, no wonder, it provided a soothing balm. A lovely short poem

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Anjandev Roy 23 November 2019

Like a gush of summer rain.......significant. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 09 March 2019

Very emotional words...pain and pleasure are always inseparable..no exception with love too...a poem that deserves a whole 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

There is love behind pain. It has been so nicely delineated in this poem. I quote....... Like a gush of summer rain It cooled my smouldering spirits Slumbered my frayed nerves And loosened my taut muscles! A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2017

A stream of blood down. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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