A Heavenly Date Poem by Tareq Jalabi

A Heavenly Date

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virginity is a treasure
shouldn`t be given away
to someone that his love
in your heart wont stay
dont make love unless
its done the right way
because doing it
lose your love you may
wait for the moment
you find your soulmate
then go out with him
in a heavenly date
***
stop not drinking wine
your feeling will be divine
then love making
will be more than fine
light some candles to create
a romantic atmosphere
let all your love
to him appear
listen to your heart
have no fear
****
let him grab you
and with his love stab you
because its the ultimate excitment
when love goes through....
let your heart prevail
surrender to sin
if you back down now
it may never win
lay head on his shoulder
after you two dine
tell him in your soul
he has built a shrine
and whisper gently
please, always be mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Ng Li Hoon 01 September 2008

Good write! I indeed enjoy it.

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

wow! wow! i really love this.. especially this part, virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay.. hmmm.100% agree, it's everyone's sacred temple.. thnks for sharing this.. thumbs up! !

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asma Jone 02 December 2008

Oh my god! ! hahaha really awesome poem love love it.: P

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Hi Blue eyes! A very conservative thinking in this day! But you've raison, love is the most important thing in our life. Congratulations my young boy!

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*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay so... so true. this is one of the best poems I have read all week. truly a piece of art. great job. Becca

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 22 November 2009

Wonderfully written! A clear vision of complete surrender! BUT... dear, do it please after the matrimonial vow! REGARDS...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2009

virginity is a treasure shouldn`t be given away to someone that his love in your heart wont stay dont make love unless its done the right way because doing it lose your love you may wait for the moment you find your soulmate then go out with him in a heavenly date..........dear it is so lovely ppresentation..... easy to understand and very simple language..... why compromisoe virginity when not sure of honesty... oh, so nicely worded poem.....10 read mine browneyes and two bright eyes too....

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Sifa Lombahe 17 September 2009

like i so agree to keep your self for someone who love you must don't just throw it all away like that

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What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

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What a beautiful romantic poem, and old fashioned in its composition. I love it. 10 Karin Anderson

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