A Humble Advice Poem by Rekha Mandagere

This was a very nice and well expressed 'piece' Rekha! This was writtten with so much passion as usual. I gave this a 10 as well!

“Shutter in the limbo of darkness”, a little rays glow that leads the pavement to happiness of desire....a poem of deliverance and passion to love beyond wisdom of human impulse...thank you and God bless, a star and a 10 +++

It was a marvellous poem written in a good tone. Nice advice to your son. Liked and rated it 10. TFS

Lovely wise words to a son. Nothing compares to a mother's love love your style and work. Please comment on my poems. thank you.

It is wonderful imagination co related the strength of everglowing and powerful SUN what so ever hurdles may come SUN appears as brighter as ever after paasing thru the darkned clouds. Nice to read - 10

Patience is the key to win Tolerance will take you far from sin Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! teaching virtues and finding joy in it...... you are spiritual. tony

An insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. A well texted and nicely thought out piece graced with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

Life is not a funny game Every moment is challenge to tame Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad..... a marvelous advice to your son and to all young ones.......take future in your hands and rely on God............. God bless you for this advice. tony

Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! Very appropriate advice of a worthy mother to a worthy son.

QUOTABLE LINES! ! ! Life is not a funny game Roads to reach the goals are hard Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up!