* A Joy Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* A Joy

Rating: 5.0


if it was a share
which gave you joy
how can you use it
as a ploy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 09 April 2009

Interesting lines joy and ploy?

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Louis Rams 09 April 2009

when two or more people share a joy then how can anyone use it as a (gimmick) ploy it is a good write.

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Ken E Hall 09 April 2009

A lady said a man enjoys another man looking at his love, its the woman that can make it a torment, nice A joy.......oh the lady was Jane Austin regards uavanice1

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Kesav Easwaran 09 April 2009

very interesting...i liked the way words have been ployed here...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 April 2009

a wonderful question. shan

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Crazy Vampire 02 June 2009

nice poem :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Barry A. Lanier 15 April 2009

Seeing this as haihuetic in lenth and intent, , , disgust with using affection and love delteriously

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 April 2009

This seems to be a mini version of 'A Seed Within. ' and that is not good to start with. Even this little verse is not clear to this reader in terms of total meaning. Perhaps, it is a language thing. But whatever it is, it isn't good. GW62

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Hari Khabrani 11 April 2009

Poem is short & readablem Please go through my poems SHARE and FORGIVE.

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~ Jon London ~ 11 April 2009

Bravo! Fantastic job says so much my friend

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