It is not enough to have our own identity.
Our individuality is just one layer, a small brick
In a multilayered cosmic structure.
We are part of a bigger world,
And wish to be part of that larger identity.
To be a mother-father, brother-sister,
Son or daughter or a friend and relative
Is part of accepting that greater identity.
A social activity related to the service of others
Is rewarded by a sense of elation and stimulation.
In an environment where wider consciousness
Of a larger community is overlooked
Sense of oneness is diminished.
A segregated individual starts to
Suffer from malice of loneliness
Holding an insecure place
In a large body of universal existence.
You provided the societal context for perception of life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
A very well exposure of a community feeling, To ensure the peace in life we have to live in a larger global family. I have to endear all so that I also will be dear to them.
Yes, human beings are one.Only that one section should not subdue the other. Struggle should be against this, not that you are English and we am Indians.A good message.
I could collect precious substance from last four lines of this wonderful poem! A poem of great value and substance!
Our individuality is just one layer, and our identity is just like a small brick. Bit truly we have a greater cosmic identity a s souls, the children of God. Our true identity is with universal existence. This is an interesting poem very beautifully and excellently penned...10
A segregated individual starts to Suffer from malice of loneliness Holding an insecure place In a large body of universal existence. -A great poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
universal existence, I like it, thanks. good one Savita.