** A Life ** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

** A Life **

Rating: 4.0


Your hidden jellylike fleshes irritate
My little warm brother
Embracing your inner organisms
Authenticating the friendliness
Adorable of pinky madness
Stumbled upon the insertion
Lava flowing with enriched
Armageddon of nutritious juices
Like driving down
The alley of Mount Everest
The reason why mankind
Existence is penultimate
We cannot erase
The pleasure
A life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristina B; Williams 11 July 2009

no words needed to describe this 1..10s again for #6....see i told you i will pay you back for the favor which is no favor at all..need the comment n the votes..im lacking

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

'We cannot erase The pleasure A life' Marvelous short poem on life. Last lines are amazing.

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

we can't erase the pleasure in life..nice expression..congrats for this top marks..grace

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Subroto Chatterjee 13 June 2009

'...'We cannot erase, The pleasure, A life..' So true. Including the pain too. Cheers. Subroto

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Riquetta Elliott 13 February 2009

This very excellent Mr. Yusof descibinh about life. Great job.

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Exasperation 26 December 2019

Now absolute diabolical insolence, you are......preternaturally good.

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 September 2009

Well, the title caught my attention and the poem is simply beautiful. Well done

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Nikunj Sharma 10 August 2009

life is one, pleasures are many, including the ones mentioned here..........read my poem called MAGNETS

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

Life is self-breeding! It has always umpredictable ways to show us the wonders of love. Lovely poem!

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Broken Heart 13 July 2009

very nyc poem! ! keep it up! !

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