A Living Fantasy Poem by Romeo Della Valle

A Living Fantasy

Rating: 4.8


Awaiting patiently
For a new sunrise to arrive
With my heart already healed
And my mind at peace,
I still envision someone special
Coming my way one day!

Someone who will not walk
Slowly in front of me
Or behind as my shadow
But someone close by my side
Heading the same direction
Toward the apex of life!

I want someone humble,
Fragile and caring
Bearing the softness of
A beautiful flower
And as colorful as the Rainbow!
Someone who will not
Look into my eyes
Instead of my heart!

I need someone
Holding with pride my hand
While walking facing the Sun
Without going blind,
In search of new horizons!
Someone like you!
The one I haven't yet found!

Now, the question still remains:
Where are you my love?
I can hardly wait to meet you
Since time is passing by rapidly
And only the dream will stay behind!
Hurry up! Come to me!
And make this fantasy a reality!


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 26 July 2012

Romeo, oh Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo - hope you find your Juliet real soon. Lovely poem.

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Neela Nath Das 26 July 2012

Subjectivity is one of the traits of your poems. It makes your poem more authentic and impressive. Loved this job too.

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Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2012

Reality bites thats the reason we must live and die in our own worlds of fantasy.Reality is a machine.It has been programmed by men and commanded therefore.Only when it stops, it is thrown away or perhaps stopped for the another.

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Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Go Romeo! What a tender, idealistic, yet realistic picture of love and relationship you paint here.

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Charles Bernard 27 July 2012

wow, again wow, you have filled your thoughts with fantasies of love what happens when loves knocks on your door? ? ? ? ? ? nicely written.

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Clarence Prince 27 July 2016

May that someone hears your plea and hurry! Thanks for sharing!

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Madhabi Banerjee 27 July 2016

excellent. I like it.well thought

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Sodoko Zavaki 15 October 2012

Awesome poem. I really like this poem =) Fantasy rocks =D

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Ken E Hall 05 August 2012

Romance in a living fantasy makes the reader feel for the subject and tell him to mount his white horse and ride out to find this dream lover..she is out there waiting go man go! Grand write Romeo...regards

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Robert Green 01 August 2012

A wonderful poem Romeo very well thought and written.

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