A Lost Relationship Poem by Heather Burns

A Lost Relationship

Rating: 4.0


The flowers
have lost
their petals.

Found refuge
somewhere
on a distant
shore.

Now the
season has
changed.

The grass
is lush and
green.

Tiny buds
awaken from
their winter's
nap.

A relationship
lost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Honeytip 29 June 2013

Such weight in so few words: ^) This is just so lovely.....thanks for sharing your art. Love Roobs xxx

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David Wood 29 June 2013

This is a lovely poem about life.

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2013

Is there any pessimistic tone that rings like a sad music? I feel so.Superb!

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Ambrosia A 28 June 2013

Trees never worry about lost petals and birds, It just waits for a new season to boom.... A loving heart is never a looser, it is a born winner. Those who don't deserve they will loose that Lovely heart and become a looser forever...... Nice, poignant poem

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 June 2013

Tiny buds awaken - new relationship blooms! Simple words, nice flow. Thank you.

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Madhabi Banerjee 06 December 2016

beautiful written.thanks for sharing

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Pamela Sinicrope 14 September 2015

I like this poem. The nature imagery is a perfect metPhor for death and rebirth of love in new forms. Bravo!

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Amitava Sur 30 October 2013

Yes - through time's passage the existence is lost, relationship also fades away, which is a pity. but definitely ushers a new era for the new comers (here the buds) ...... very nice

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Debanjan Dhar 17 July 2013

wow. so easily said and done ..but then again, that's how it is very nicely put, ma'am

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

Excellent poem about life, it makes one wonder about tomorrow. Siya_! !

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