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This is a lovely poem about life.
Is there any pessimistic tone that rings like a sad music? I feel so.Superb!
Trees never worry about lost petals and birds, It just waits for a new season to boom.... A loving heart is never a looser, it is a born winner. Those who don't deserve they will loose that Lovely heart and become a looser forever...... Nice, poignant poem
Tiny buds awaken - new relationship blooms! Simple words, nice flow. Thank you.
beautiful written.thanks for sharing
I like this poem. The nature imagery is a perfect metPhor for death and rebirth of love in new forms. Bravo!
Yes - through time's passage the existence is lost, relationship also fades away, which is a pity. but definitely ushers a new era for the new comers (here the buds) ...... very nice
wow. so easily said and done ..but then again, that's how it is very nicely put, ma'am
Excellent poem about life, it makes one wonder about tomorrow. Siya_! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Such weight in so few words: ^) This is just so lovely.....thanks for sharing your art. Love Roobs xxx