A Lotus' Dream Poem by ONElia AVElar

A Lotus' Dream

Rating: 3.0


A lotus dreams of pollination
far from the fast streams...
My lotus pose for meditation
provokes insects and bees
to come, alight and look
for nectar, pollen, seeds
and so disturb my concentration,
ignore my higher needs
and bring a Buddha-smile to my face
by tickling tenderly my heels...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mystic Indian 24 August 2009

you've given words for the spiritual bliss that's so rare and hard to even speak about.10/10

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 26 July 2009

wow a nice composition, buddha tenderly tickling your heals.... So nice....

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Indira Babbellapati 23 May 2009

if it's insects and bees with you, it's mosquitoes with me! see the connect across continents?

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Ivor Hogg 07 January 2009

Not only stray thoughts distract perhaps Dame nature thinks you need to wake up

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Roland Bastien 07 December 2008

I have been in a situation like this one. I know the feeling, searching for emptiness. there is a mantra that help me a lot kate, kate, para kate budhiye soha.... good luck. Roland

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Ruby Honeytip 03 January 2013

Simply gorgeous! Delightfully illustrative and happy: -)

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[email protected] Osamedua 12 October 2012

Your works are classic! ! I simply love them.

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Hans Vr 22 May 2010

full of bliss and enlightenment 10+

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IamNo body 18 May 2010

Nirvana comes through mundane ways!

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Vinod Kumar 17 November 2009

Lotus is highly concentrated, it is the symbol of tripple balance and the godess of all art sits in the white lotus, nice poem, and of course the Bow Tree is also helps meditation, nice 10++

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