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A Love Mathematics

Rating: 4.4

Before me is a sum
and the mathematics is on my shoulder.
Minus, minus, plus, minus, minus, plus
is the formulae.

How do you win the heart of a virgin girl?
All you have to do is sing a love anthem
and recite the pledge.
Thus it goes,
‘if you find her romantic eyes skipping your eyes, find a rose.

And when your rose finds out she wears a heart
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Tuesday, July 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018

Really a beautiful love poem, well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with insight. A brilliant work of art. Thanks for sharing Ebi and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Ebi. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dear Ebi Robert, Just read your poem - A love Mathematics! You have chanted and written the word 'Love innumerable times like a 'Mantra' With that you have conquered love. :) I loved your poem, your mathematics and your passion for love! I am voting full 10 for you!

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Olugbenga Ayoola 18 November 2015

u try but ur poem lack of metre, and interm of retoricle question u really try, the stanze is not well arrange. Well u really try put more effort ok

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Ebi Robert 23 November 2015

hahahahaha! What do you mean by my poem lack metre? is there any rule in poetry that says that all poems must maintain a particular metre pattern? Or do you want me to go on the iambic panemetre? Did I tell you I am writing a sonetta, or a terza rimma? As for the stanzas, I still did not get your opinion about the arrangement? what kind of arrangement did you expect? Don't you know that there is fusion of stanza types? You are very funny! Did is the problem most writers get. Poesy has no straight jacket rule.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 12 July 2015

Well done. Its a nice one. Thanks for sharing

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 October 2014

Sank deep into the love ocean jumped from Mars to Venus and enjoying thank you

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Patricia Grantham 09 August 2014

A very sweet and loving poem. So light and refreshing. Nice.

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