A Love Song Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
A Love Song
Come climb the sleeping mountain my darling,
Come stray through the guarding trees with me;
For I long for the nature’s solemn song
And the singing birds of the green forest.
Come watch the waving leaves my beloved,
Come hear the enchanting music they make;
As they softly swing with the gentle wind
Like the singing birds dancing in the air.
Come walk to the mountain’s peak my darling,
Come envision the halcyon place with me;
Beneath the moonlight we'll make our haven
Like the singing birds nestle in the tree.
Come lie down and look at the sparkling sky,
Come cuddle me with your sweet promises;
Till my last breath I’ll hold on to your love
With the singing birds in the green forest.
27th August 2008
Jazlle I really admired the way you used the theme of birds to tell your love song. It was beautifully romantic with lovely imagery as well. Well done. Karin Anderson
good love song this...the last stanza lines are temptingly inviting...ten for you, Joan
A loving invite to that special person with very interesting choice of words.
its rich and melodious but more then song ebven and what you expressed here is meaningful..multiple meanings are coming out from it.. the combination of words is enough catchy, heart feeling and impressive.. what i like in this poem is a promtion of struggle and courage... liked it.. and you deserve to be called good poetess of children and young generation as well.. pray for your long and happy life..just go on..future is yours...10++++++++++++
This is a very well expressed, written, and beguiling love poem, Jazlle. I liked your phrasing in it very much, as well as your use of singing birds as a metaphor for love that repeated in the final line of each verse. It's quite an accomplished write! Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 9:02:38 PM # 1.0.0
Simply beautiful. Lucky he who is allowed to wander through the guarding trees and explore. Your words express such velvety softness while the sing the sirens' song.