A Lovely Day Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Lovely Day

Rating: 5.0


Blue sky cast shadow
On the wide, clear silver lake
A boy joins the scene.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 September 2020

A well written haiku. Truly wonderful and excellent...5 stars+++

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Kostas Lagos 25 September 2020

What a wonderful image! Love it!

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Irfanulla Shariff 25 September 2020

Wonderful portrayal of nature. Magnificent Haiku! Thanks for sharing, Rose. Big 10

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Valsa George 26 September 2020

...................so that I can see silver clouds moving through the aquamarine waters! Clouds above and below....! What a splendid scene! This mesmerizing scene is animated by the presence of a boy! A lovely sketch!

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Anjandev Roy 27 September 2020

Wonderful short work........thank u, dear poetess......anjandev roy.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 December 2022

Beautifully expressed! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 10 December 2022

Ahh, Beautiful imagery with possibilities and hope in the air! ..

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Excellent Haiku on nature

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 28 September 2020

l am touched by the serenity of this poem........10+

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Adilson Pinto 27 September 2020

First of all, thank you very much for visiting my page! It's a great pleasure to be talking to you dear poet, because I simply love Philippines and its folk! About your poems, I can realize deep sensibility in what you write, like this poem! This poem seems to be an instantaneous from a photographic machine! You didn't need a billion of words to capture the moment! You did it fast, deep, poetic and beautiful! Congratulations! Accept please a strong hug from Brazil!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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