A Message To Us. Poem by Fay Slimm

A Message To Us.

Rating: 5.0


Not one day goes by
Without bird-song from sky
Reminding us why
They believe life to be good.

Not one cloudless night
Neglects awesome sight
Of starburst in flight
Appealing to be understood.

Not one blade of green
Allows light to be seen
Without using the means
From the sun to make itself food.

Not one flowery bloom
Witholds it's perfume
As each day turns to noon.
Scenting the world if it could!

Not one wild-living soul
Acts without instinct's goal
To make it's life whole.
Not governed by destructive mood..

Earth's message is near
To those willing to hear.
By making it clear
We too must live life as we should.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tango 31 August 2008

This is very good. It's time that man realised that he is part of nature, and lived within her bounds. An excellent poem. Tango.

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Tom Balch 01 September 2008

Tall order Fay, sadly cant see it, can hope though 10 regards Tom

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Chitra - 03 September 2008

This one is a powerful write we need to respect nature's as well as each others rights

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David Desantis 08 September 2008

very beautiful, and optimistic. Reminds me of the things in nature that really matter

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Kobby King 10 September 2008

great! the ability to convey hope and beauty about a seemingly vanity pursuit we call life....i can't believe i just read five of your poems at a go, very captivating.

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Ravi A 05 April 2009

'Not one wild-living soul Acts without instinct's goal To make it's life whole. Not governed by destructive mood'...these four lines serve the key lines of the poem. Only a man closer to heart can write such beautiful verses...10

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Deva De Silva 16 January 2009

This flowing prose and its reflection echo the way I see the world myself. Your words star at the nature lovers’ singing hearts… it affirms your sensitivity as a poet to your surroundings. Another one of your great poems Fay!

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

live the present excitements, the present plesantaries of life...good write, Fay...good message...10

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Ian Bowen 30 October 2008

Fay, a joy to read. Straight from the hand of a gentle soul.10/10 Ian

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Adam Day 26 September 2008

Fay, this was such a wonderful read that i read. it brightened my dad indeed! thank you Adam

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