A Moments Escape Poem by Bonnie Collins

A Moments Escape

Rating: 3.7


Take me back in time
Open my timeless capsule of
your soul


Walk down my cobblestoned path
decorated with all the memories
that made us warm

Once agan the starlights will
enhance our foolish hearts

Like Cinderella, all will end
at the stirke

But oh what melodramatic souls we Have!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Zaldivar 12 January 2009

Bonnie this is, as every single poem you have, one extraordinary piece of art. It is a shot poem with such a beautiful meaning. a hundred out of ten for this.... well i cant vote 100 so i'll just vote ten. haha lol XD

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James Foulk 24 November 2008

a beautiful and warm piece of lovely poetry

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C. P. Sharma 03 November 2008

Bonnie, so true. It is in moment only that we live several births, can dig timeless capsule from the unfathomable depth of our hearts and traverse millions of miles on this bank and shoal of time. A Moments Escape is a master sroke from the pen of a great poet.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 October 2008

a write romantic, dignified...beautiful use of words...i liked 10

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Robert Sheridan 16 September 2008

Bonnie, Sometimes that's all we need to escape - only a moment. Lovely verse here - a charming write! Robert

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really good poetry. loved it

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Duh Huh 20 February 2009

Beautiful imagery of the heart. Thank you. :)

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Ron Flowers 25 January 2009

A truly beautiful poem, Bonnie. Ron

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 January 2009

Hi Bonnie and this was truly an enchanting read and it had a very warm touch to it. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Indira Renganathan 22 January 2009

A decent love with melodramatic souls

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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