A Piece Of Flesh Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Piece Of Flesh

Rating: 5.0


a piece of flesh
in the body
if it becomes good
the whole body becomes good
if it gets spoilt
the whole body gets spoilt
that is the heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 21 August 2009

just fantastic...................

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 August 2009

Though biologically the Human Heart is in mass principal both an organ, as well as the most required & productive muscle in the Human Anatomy, and in fact aside from the pericardium, the Heart has little to no flesh at all....I still like the concept of this work, very much...AND...if your allusion to A CONNECTION OF Heart & flesh is of theological symbolisation...then this is spot-on & simpatico! Solid penning. FjR

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Surya . 28 August 2009

yeah! fantastic throught and reality.could also write a small pump? .beautiful thought and write, . voted10 surya

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

In simple words you've stated something very profound (with a true touch of grace of course) ..(smile)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 September 2009

Sudden death could occured if the heart stops Definitely a piece of flesh that's so important to our life.Good writes Ahmad.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 01 September 2009

it is not what comes out of ourselves but what comes in what corrupt us, great.

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 29 August 2009

A precious piece well penned.10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

very good one! .....

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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