My mind reels with words of love, desire and passion
I try so desperately to grasp
lines and verses just something… to tell how I feel
They race around my heart through my soul leaving my mind dazed
Walking on clouds lost in a lovers haze
I find the only ones I grasp, are just simple words
That stands out like a beacon in the night….
I love you
An untraditionally succinct offering from the Pen of the Princess...but trust me all ye commentors to follow.....It is smooth, crisp quality, not quanity, that makes a poem efflorescent & poignant....and this poem serves as the paradigm for this claim...Sweet serve, lass! FjR
Some say it with a look, some with their words and some with both I feel that you would be the latter, Love duncan X
Those three words are like 'life giver', given by God.Undisputed bliss! .Great writes Pat.
Poetry and love are like our two eyes...........let the words reel as it is then grasp firmly! You added some ingredients to this rare love.
They race around my heart through my soul leaving my mind dazed Rachel Ann Butler
When you say those words the way you say it can make it so wonderful. Lovely Poetry this one..............
lovely expressionate piece of loving words of poetic loveliness.....well written...simply lovely Best of Health & Happiness Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is a splendid thing, as is your poem.