A Poets Love Letter Poem by Abhay Vignesh Liginlal

A Poets Love Letter

Rating: 4.8


My love for you is a boundless ocean
But the world can only see drops of it,

My feelings about you flow incessantly
But the world can only know notions,

My thoughts about you are pure like nectar
But the world can only taste drops,

My hope is like the constant sea
But the world can know only a separate shore,

My dreams are all vastly coloured
But the world can only see seven colours,

My mind is flooded with memories about you
But the world can read only my poems,

My poems are strewn with endless emotions
But the world can read only a few lines,

My days have become eternal with your brief presence
Though the world will call it seconds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 01 March 2011

Oops! Pardon me, may I correct myself: 'drop'.

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Elena Sandu 01 March 2011

Yes, I do like this poem isn't it great to have a love to be inspired? Do you think poets care for what the world see? What if a poet might want to convey own thoughts perfectly understood only to the ones that are intended for? am not a poet so I am just wondering..Even if the world read only half or too little, I still think is worth sharing..in this world there is so not enough love so please let me feel your poem as a little gift and let me be one from the 'world' to smile very happy as I fed myself one little dropp of love. Thank you for share,10

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Dr Jim Allen 23 February 2011

We are all the drops of the boundless sea of humanity. A very nice read my friend, keep it up! Feel free to browse some of my newer poems!

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Annabel Cruz 22 February 2011

nice imagery...l like the irony of a 'boundless ocean' and the 'drops' that are perceived. Nice. AC PS....couldn't find the poem you invited me to read...'Bleeding Heart on a Looking Glass'? ? ?

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Jenny Gordon 14 January 2011

Very sweet love letter in romantic couplets!

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C.R. Clark 18 July 2011

This poem is very expressive. The world rarely understands the depth of feeling in the heart of the poet. Once in awhile when that connection is made, it is indeed special. An excellent write. Thanks Richard

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Yeo Qian Yi 08 March 2011

Very romantic. Beautiful

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Andres Perdomo 07 March 2011

I like this poem so much. beautiful! Keep writing

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Romeo Della Valle 06 March 2011

A very beautiful and heart touching poem. Also, well penned and full of emotions! Love it! Keep it up! 10+++Love and Peace...

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Dave Dafes 05 March 2011

Wow! Beautiful expression of emotions that the world can never fathom... Well written.

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