Rose Marie Juan Austin

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A Rainbow - Poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin

Have you ever seen
A rainbow over the mountain?
It is like a crown
Put on its tip
Showing to the world
Its grandeur and glory.

Have you ever thought
The rainbow that spread
Across the vast sky
Is like a ring given by a lover?
A symbol of promise that
He will come back again and again
Giving comfort and beauty.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow


Comments about A Rainbow by Rose Marie Juan Austin

  • Jez BurlJez Burl (9/4/2019 7:24:00 AM)

    A symbol of promise that
    He will come back again and again
    Giving comfort and beauty

    Spell-binding write...The imagery you created projects a aura of inexplicable beauty that only dwells in the heart....
    made me see rainbow in a deeper perception...To my poem list and 10+++++++
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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (9/1/2019 1:57:00 AM)

    It is amazing how a poet sees things different from what most see.
    A rainbow like a crown worn,
    or a ring given by the lover.
    Beautiful, rains, called megha in Sanskrit can be imagined as the lover
    sending a special ring for Earth, an eager bride, that he showers with his love.
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  • Malvikas Poet ChannelMalvikas Poet Channel (8/30/2019 1:36:00 AM)

    Nice environment, feeling pleasant to read. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (8/24/2019 10:14:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry. A very astute comparison between true love and rainbow. Simple and beautiful. Loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (8/18/2019 1:41:00 PM)

    Comfort and beauty!
    Colours in unity;
    Muse of the Rainbow.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (8/17/2019 10:54:00 AM)

    Finely crafted imagery...very sweet poem dear friend.../// (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (8/14/2019 10:31:00 PM)

    A spectacular poetic description of a rainbow! (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (8/13/2019 11:37:00 PM)

    A wonder romantic description of rainbows, imagining it as a crown or an engagement ring are the lovely poetic ideas. Well wrote Rose, a rose among poetesses. (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Feldman (8/13/2019 3:52:00 AM)

    No, I have never seen a rainbow as spoken of in this lovely poem. I love rainbows and you poetic vision of them enlarged mine and gave me an unforgettable vision of love and beauty in nature's arms. See, what excellent
    poetry can do. Thank you, dear Rose Marie.
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  • Celyfer dalire (8/11/2019 5:55:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem po :) keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (8/11/2019 9:42:00 AM)

    A symbol of promise......great piece. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (8/10/2019 6:07:00 AM)

    A symbol of promise that/He will come back again and again/Giving comfort and beauty.......powerful imagination! A wonderful poem so beautifully penned................10 (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (8/10/2019 2:40:00 AM)

    An excellent expression, dear ate Rose....10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Jane Campion (8/10/2019 2:15:00 AM)

    Great imagery and imagination. I have seen double rainbows. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 10, 2019



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