Have you ever seen
A rainbow over the mountain?
It is like a crown
Put on its tip
Showing to the world
Its grandeur and glory.
Have you ever thought
The rainbow that spread
Across the vast sky
Is like a ring given by a lover?
A symbol of promise that
He will come back again and again
Giving comfort and beauty.
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A symbol of promise that/He will come back again and again/Giving comfort and beauty.......powerful imagination! A wonderful poem so beautifully penned................10
A symbol of promise......great piece. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.
What a tenderly beautiful thoughts. Written impeccably. In whose beauty and sweet description, one could certainly and willingly get lost. Very, very attractively, unforgettable. Love it! To my poem list, immediately, can't lose that rainbow.
Beautiful poetic expression on the rainbow. Both stanzas provide excellent imagery 10+
It is amazing how a poet sees things different from what most see. A rainbow like a crown worn, or a ring given by the lover. Beautiful, rains, called megha in Sanskrit can be imagined as the lover sending a special ring for Earth, an eager bride, that he showers with his love.
Excellent poetry. A very astute comparison between true love and rainbow. Simple and beautiful. Loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagery and imagination. I have seen double rainbows.