A Rendezvous Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Rendezvous

Rating: 4.9


A naive and beautiful bud,
Full of dreams and vibrant.
A sun so bold and bright,
Its golden arms give warmth.

Together they enjoy
One pleasant summer day.
The rest of the world
Does not exist to them.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 09 September 2022

This is a glorious piece......thank u, dear poetess....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 September 2022

Simply wonderful Bravo Top 5

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 September 2022

A truly lovely poem! It's in my List.

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Indira Renganathan 10 September 2022

A beautiful love poem with a nice allegory....many *************

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Richard Wlodarski 11 September 2022

Rose Marie, I love the way that you've used nature to symbolise a budding romance! Absolutely beautiful!

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Susan Williams 23 January 2023

'Its golden arms give warmth.'---now that is a line straight out of a poet's heart---your words have a habit of whispering magic into a reader's soul--top marks

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 31 December 2022

Lovely imagery, Rose Marie

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

A sun so bold and bright, Its golden arms give warmth...sparkling poetic expression. I find much substance from these phrases, 'together they enloy' and 'the rest of the world does not exist for them'

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2022

I gave four stars. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2022

I've had moments close to this, but few and far between, with some, maybe all, of my four wives. Maybe I'm not 'bright' enough to have enjoyed more such times? : ( bri

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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