A Rhyme Of A Beggar Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Rhyme Of A Beggar

Rating: 4.5


O reddish cloud!
in morning June
pour some waters
to this dry ocean

O ripe sky!
in evening March
pour some milk
to this empty valley

O young dove!
on golden tree
grab some love
from this slippery cliff

O purple cow!
on tranquil field
catch some care
from this hidden bungalow

a light in old fort
must be delight
a hope on a cup of tea
must be enough

a smile in a sparkling store
must be for awhile
a scent in a friendly tavern
must be tuneful

a silken glove on a glassy table
must be such tenderness
a white compass in a toy box
must be such happiness

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Louis Rams)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 24 March 2009

A good poem with enough empathetic view.

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Chitra - 24 March 2009

A very empathetic poem...heartl stirring...we have so much but we still rail whereas this poor man has nothing but has hope

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 March 2009

Nice poetic flow...good

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Roshni D'Souza 21 March 2009

Really enjoyed the flow in this one. Thanks!

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Lynda Robson 17 March 2009

Nice flow and well written as all your poetry is, 10 Lynda xx

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 August 2010

I enjoyed this poem... loved the first four stanzas.

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Omar Ibrahim 24 June 2009

i admire your way of thinking and writing..............and i enjoy all your poem.... may ALLAH bless you........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2009

You're the beggar of hearts n souls.Masterful piece.

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Louis Rams 17 May 2009

AN HONOR BESTOWED UPON ME, WHICH I CAN NOT SEE, BUT YOU HAVE SET MY MIND FREE. APPARANTLY I AM THE WHITE COMPASS IN THE TOY BOX FOR I AM RICH IN HAPPINESS. THANK YOU

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Wistfully wishing asking for the out of reach things-life is such a tease! ! ! ! a ten from me....

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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