A Rose Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose

Rating: 4.7


I'm a white rose pure and innocent
Pluck me not for your momentary pleasures
Crush me not to be found after years
In the books among the shelves
Or in the jewel box of your treasure
Free me please from your whims n desires.
To the rhythmic breeze let me sway
In the warmth of love let me bask
Let me live these fleeting moments
Feeling the ecstasy of freedom

© Aarzoo Mehek

A Rose
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: books,freedom,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 June 2018

I do like this soulful write of white.++10 Congratulations on your posting in this category.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 November 2016

A lovely super cool poem of freedom in metaphor and delicate to read in comparison. Thumbs up. Great to read Fromu again. I hope u will too my latest titled ashurah

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Red Soul 19 June 2018

Roses, all flowers, humans, anything alive should be treated with the love, care, and respect they deserve. A wonderful poem ma'am. Thanks for sharing: -) And congratulations on being the poet of the day ^_^^_^

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Congratulations 19 June 2018

On being a red idiot. A yellow idiot would be more appropriate for hiding your name and posting no poems. How could anyone give you any credibility?

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Cigeng Zhang 23 November 2016

Such a beautiful White Rose will become the floral essence with the lasting fragrance.Nicely written.

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 28 January 2026

Beautiful poem. The simple and rhythmic dictation invites symbolic pictures...

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Koffi B Sossou 09 August 2025

What a beautiful poem!

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Tsuki no Ume 29 July 2025

A truly beautiful poem..loved it! !

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Sandra Feldman 20 June 2025

This poem is so deeply beautiful and emotional, it brought tears to my eyes. thank you for this Gem! star favorite.

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This poem stands elevated to position #58 in the list of Best Poems Of Members. Actually the poem deserved to be placed within the Top Ten poems. I hope PoemHunter will recognise the real talent sooner or later..

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