A Rose For My Heart Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Rose For My Heart

Rating: 4.5


A rose for my heart to rise with wings
To the heavens deep, where pleasure rings

With bliss as clouds—high silver beings.
The rose's romantic fragrance sings,

Dear as the tune the nightingale brings.
To my heart's delight, its singing swings.

How my heart to nirvana, it flings.
To the rose, with rapture my heart clings.

In my heart, liveliness outright springs,
Like the mountain, whose cheerful height slings

To the sky, where the star of day tings.
To my heart, how fay-like the feelings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 07 September 2009

a sweet piece..well expressed..

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Honest Heart 30 August 2009

very well done......... :)

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chaeming piece. most times i thing the third rhyming word makes it less appealing, than the second or so, but you made it work here.. good

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

very poetic in approach

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Priya Talsania 26 August 2009

Lovely, delightful read! I really enjoyed it. Can smell the roses and feel the nature sublime.

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Landsley Alexandre 11 April 2011

I really enjoyed this poem very good

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Beauty Philosophy 25 December 2009

A lovely read and a nice present to offer to one's heart...

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Light and simple, has a good flow and nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading this.10+++ best regards, jdh

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

This is a thought provoking poem directing my thoughts inward

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MKG F 25 September 2009

very nice poem! made my heart flutter. ;)

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