In the hope
that the world will become
a better place
we carry on
In the hope
that we will be saved
we carry on
It's sad but it's true
we are waiting for nothing
because only we can save ourselves
and only we can make the world
a better place
It's sad
but it's true
when we have high hope, we may be sad, but people take it easy, when something is not that important! I agree with you that we have to save ourselves! Nice to read!
Waiting for nothing and only we can make the world a better place. Very very good. And true.
It is indeed sad but true, it is all down to people to make the world a better place. Another good one from your pen Dave.
Great write, Dave. a wonderful put together of words that depict our reality.
Yes, we can make the world better one person at a time, only after we have saved and made ourselves better. Very good poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Written very well. With no self worth, gives no desire to muddle through times of despair, No sense of pride leaves little to hold a candle to, As a disease hopelessness will spread, the weak will fall through, the strong we survive. written by Nicholle Gibson. Isn't just a total lost when you see people out there that really make it seem like we are waiting for nothing? I like it
We are in a better place with thoughts like this poem...that is what poetry is for...a voice to make the world a better place..its true...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This idea looked easy but after I read your poem. Very well written...... Simple and meaningful.