A Sensual Kiss Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Sensual Kiss

Rating: 4.8


Lips sumptuous you have in a way quiet,
Excites me to consume them with a kiss
To give my heart a sensational riot
Of penchant wild, draws me into its abyss.
Within is stroked like the wind keen on trees,
Like the summer at its brightest in June;
Your tongue, rich like creamy soup made from peas,
My tongue rubs like fingers petting a prune.
Through the kiss is pleasure marked as crystal,
Our hearts grasping each other without bar.
Their heat flares as the bang of a pistol,
Flare rhythmic like erotic guitar.
Savouring you is tense felt so brooded,
Touch of the kiss is never concluded.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 24 August 2009

A sensual kiss, sensationalised in words......Superb write! ! ! ! !

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Ershad Mazumder 23 August 2009

Its an excellant piece of love poem. But I felt it like report on a kiss. Make it more divine. It will become a eternal love poem.

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Myrtle Thomas 16 August 2009

I love how you describe the kiss of your lover as you have done.A very sweet loving way to compare it as a crystal.You have written a wonderful piece here.

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Vijay Gupta 15 August 2009

Juicy poem. Fantastic. I like it. Please read my new poem 'little bird', paradise discovered, twinkling star. thanks

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Darlene Belcher 12 August 2009

Reminds me of my first time... /sigh, such beauty and passion from just a kiss. such a thing is known to haunt you dreams until you have it again....a pleasent way to remember such events, Well done!

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Prashant Shaurya 26 December 2009

well sir, a kiss is a kiss anyways.. the best way to express your love for anyone... however big be the complications in our love life, a passionate kiss does the magic for you.. regards prashant

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this is really good..well done i enjoyed it

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Obinna Eruchie 01 December 2009

naphright naphright (12/1/2009 12: 14: 00 AM) the name of the poem said it, i felt the words literally

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 November 2009

‘To give my heart a sensational riot…’ Indeed ignites fire of love. Wow! What a nice poem? Great line like fireworks. Voted ten++ Ms. Nivedita. UK Cordially invite to read / comment and….my poems niv

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Emu Getachew 23 October 2009

This piece has movements that erupt into several moments…great imagination extremely vivid. Thanks

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