* A Simple Song Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* A Simple Song

Rating: 5.0


a song
as simple as the birds
no pride
not waiting for any appraise
i do want to sing like the bird
i want it to be my language
my talk and my voice
no pride..no appraise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 21 April 2009

beautiful expression.... lines are interesting thoughts are touching fine-flowing write... so light.....refreshing 10++++

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 19 April 2009

a plain way to express itself..in a way or another..be simple is good way in a bubble...

0 0 Reply
Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2009

This is a very short piece, which I normally like. But I simply don't understand the point the writer is trying to make. All I could do is guess, and as everyone knows, I never guess. GW62

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 19 April 2009

simple yet beautiful with elegance.....simplicity is tryly majestic than the opposite...10

0 0 Reply
Meggie Gultiano 19 April 2009

simple as it is, this song of yours is beautiful.Love it

0 0 Reply
Sonya Florentino 01 May 2009

yes, but if it is beautiful, it will be praised, for who can ignore beauty? :)

0 0 Reply
Deepti Agarwal 28 April 2009

what a simple yet powerful to be oneself wish it is... :)

0 0 Reply
Akram Saqib 27 April 2009

great wish to sing a song like a bird with any worries.good poem

0 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 27 April 2009

a simple song of profound truth...a unique style, Samanyan...

0 0 Reply
Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2009

The moent it is compelled or even asked it looses its value. Great sensitivity to freedom, I share with you, Lakshminarayan.10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success