A Sunset Ultimate with the Best Friend.
Poem-1
Oh dear!
Life's journey has been tortuous,
But the green patches and some colors,
Have sustained me
All these years.
My joy mingles with pain,
My happiness with tears,
I had left
My breath at your feet
My tears at your palm,
And my happiness
In your embrace.
I am assured
You have kept them treasured.
Dear friend!
Keep them with you
Till the sunset.
Poem-2
You are sitting at a distance,
Afraid to come to me?
How distant have you gone
When you pervade my whole being?
When you and me interchange souls
All distance become no distance,
As all tears turn into pearls.
Oh Dear! Remember me,
When you are worn out, and
Be sure that
my soul is ever with you.
Though you may call it poet's fantasy I think in real life we need friends not only to acknowledge what we do is good or bad but to support us guide us and lend their shoulders when needed, Share a laughter and spend quality time together. A thoughtful poem on the subject.10++
All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls....... touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10
i found this deeply touching, bharati, even if it is a " fantasy." of course i resonate with the idea that life is, as i often think of it, bittersweet. the standout line for me is " as tears turn into pearls." —cool! -glen
Poetic fantasies cannot be totally fantastical. There must be some clue attached to it. 'When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls' - that's fantastic, and a reality as well. 5 Stars***** for this poem.
I like the tenderness in this, Bharati, the depth of your feeling as it comes across. - Glen
All these years! ! ! ! Hustle and bustle! Musing along! ! ! Changes and challenges; Life's journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Feeling of love is well executed. It appears in between laughter and tears. True love has no distance. Body may apart but love is so real and soul is tagged with other. I cite... When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls. Beautifully inscribed.
How distant have you gone When you pervade my whole being? When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, ..................... True friendship stays in tact, though friends may stay apart for sometime. But all distance will be bridged as long as their souls are bonded together in love. In weal and woe good friends will stick to us and in our life of joy and pain, they stay as pillars of support! Beautifully written!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thankyou very much M'am, for sharing, such a lovely and heart touching poem