A Sunsetultimate With The Best Friend. Poem by Bharati Nayak

A Sunsetultimate With The Best Friend.

Rating: 5.0


A Sunset Ultimate with the Best Friend.
Poem-1
Oh dear!
Life's journey has been tortuous,
But the green patches and some colors,
Have sustained me
All these years.

My joy mingles with pain,
My happiness with tears,
I had left
My breath at your feet
My tears at your palm,
And my happiness
In your embrace.
I am assured
You have kept them treasured.

Dear friend!
Keep them with you
Till the sunset.
Poem-2

You are sitting at a distance,
Afraid to come to me?
How distant have you gone
When you pervade my whole being?
When you and me interchange souls
All distance become no distance,
As all tears turn into pearls.

Oh Dear! Remember me,
When you are worn out, and
Be sure that
my soul is ever with you.

Tuesday, July 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Like tear or laughter, our feelings of love is most real and no body can vouch that he has never felt love for someone in life.Poets have the freedom to create fantasies for themselves and others.This poem is part of an Anthology on Poetic Fantasies.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Bhatia 28 July 2020

Thankyou very much M'am, for sharing, such a lovely and heart touching poem

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2020

Though you may call it poet's fantasy I think in real life we need friends not only to acknowledge what we do is good or bad but to support us guide us and lend their shoulders when needed, Share a laughter and spend quality time together. A thoughtful poem on the subject.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2020

All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls....... touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Glen Kappy 05 August 2020

i found this deeply touching, bharati, even if it is a " fantasy." of course i resonate with the idea that life is, as i often think of it, bittersweet. the standout line for me is " as tears turn into pearls." —cool! -glen

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Khairul Ahsan 08 December 2020

Poetic fantasies cannot be totally fantastical. There must be some clue attached to it. 'When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls' - that's fantastic, and a reality as well. 5 Stars***** for this poem.

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Glen Kappy 05 October 2020

I like the tenderness in this, Bharati, the depth of your feeling as it comes across. - Glen

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2020

All these years! ! ! ! Hustle and bustle! Musing along! ! ! Changes and challenges; Life's journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2020

Feeling of love is well executed. It appears in between laughter and tears. True love has no distance. Body may apart but love is so real and soul is tagged with other. I cite... When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, As all tears turn into pearls. Beautifully inscribed.

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Valsa George 18 September 2020

How distant have you gone When you pervade my whole being? When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, ..................... True friendship stays in tact, though friends may stay apart for sometime. But all distance will be bridged as long as their souls are bonded together in love. In weal and woe good friends will stick to us and in our life of joy and pain, they stay as pillars of support! Beautifully written!

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