A Time Travel Experiment Poem by Dave Alan Walker
A Time Travel Experiment
Caught in a time between worlds
a time traveling experiment gone wrong
I'm fighting to get back to the year
I don't know when
Shards of light shooting like glass
millions of pieces arcing
like a kaleidoscope of colours
as the years roll back
Barking dogs
howling at the wolves
Howling wolves
barking at the dogs
Screaming voices
dying noises
trapped with no way back
A time travel experiment gone wrong
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Dave.
Time can push forward us in the future but it can't pull back in the past. Limitations are for time, too.
An interesting write of a time travellers plight that of getting back before last light? .......well written Dave
Ohhh, I like this, very much! Love the metaphor with the wolves, dogs... related, yet so different, wild-domestication, out of control... brilliant Dave, I love this poem! ! !
What a coincidence...only the other day I was watching, The Time Traveler's Wife (2009) film: your poem resonates perfectly with it!
Fascinating poem. Full of vivid imagery. Liked it a lot!
What a wonderful poem! So touching and impressive. Nice imaginary and imagery. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Dave, such a profound poem......10++++++++++