A Trickle Of Thought - 27 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thought - 27

Rating: 5.0

Beware of dipping your finger
In the silent water.
You will be surprised
Of what a defeaning silence can do.

Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Luis A. Estable 15 July 2021

I like these verses. They make me think of the saying 'Curiosity killed the cat.' You did a good job here, at least for this reader.

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Varsha M 15 July 2021

Very well captured voice of silence in this brevity. Thoughtful food in the mory

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Bill Cantrell 15 July 2021

What a great example of brevity at its best!

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Anjandev Roy 15 July 2021

This is truly exceptional piece..

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Indira Renganathan 15 July 2021

Very true...silence is meaningful with its own activities...5*****

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Rob Lamberton 27 January 2023

It speaks loud to me!

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Nabakishore Dash 31 May 2022

A great warning not to poke nose unnecessarily.

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Deafening silence can turn to a roaring discomfort with interference. The poetessmay want to tell others not to ecome a hinderence to the smooth flow of peace

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M Asim Nehal 16 July 2021

Awesome! ! ! Silence is soothing and killer, it all depends on the mood and the circumstances.5***

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The voice of silence is both intimidating and powerful.....Marvellous dear Rose. Top marks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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