A Trickle Of Thoughts - 51 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 51

Rating: 4.9

Be careful with your heart
When the arrow of love
Sets its pace
It hits where the deepest
Passion sits
And clouds your judgment
Compromises your wit and strength

Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Right Reserved

Wednesday, September 13, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,passion,rose,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 13 September 2023

A most marvelous Truth, about Love's ways and feelings. So beautifully and so deeply expressed, as an unforgettable favorite it must be remembered and kept!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 September 2023

Passionate and a joy to read bravo! !

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Anjandev Roy 13 September 2023

This is a wonderful write.....once again..... thanks a lot.....

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Rob Lamberton 26 July 2026

It's true, there is a way that feels right in the moment but if unrestrained can lead to misery and woe! A sound warning!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 September 2023

Sage advice on guarding the most precious (and vulnerable) thing we have. A beautiful, memorable poem!

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Richard Wlodarski 15 September 2023

Straight to my heart! A very piercing poem, my friend! Love it!

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 September 2023

So true. That is why love makes you blind. Nice write.

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Kingsley Egbukole 14 September 2023

Indeed the arrow of love can most times cause confusion in our heads. Beautiful poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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