... A True Friend_ Poem by Eyan Desir

... A True Friend_

Rating: 5.0


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Hold my branch, through time
Rhyme with honest lines
Watch my back, I'll watch yours
Stand with me in the storms
Strengthen me when I'm down
Understand my flaws
Control your emotions
Trust me, I'll trust you
In the heat of a fight
No one knows who's right
Don't use words to fright
After dark comes light
If you're still in sight
After the deadly storms
I know you are one



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~ May 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather C 11 June 2009

very impressive poem :)

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Slade Oriley 11 June 2009

It sounds like you want to be trusted. It's a very well written poem. It's paints a good picture. Keep it up.10

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Vidi Writes 11 June 2009

A give and take policy, rules the show here Endure the test, then comes the light, real There is a saying - 'Friends aren't jumper cables. You don't throw them into the trunk And pull them out for emergencies.” They are the ones, always at the side by. So much thoughts i could grasp and clasp. Thank you for these muses.

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very well wrote poem keep wirting

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Kristina B; Williams 11 June 2009

i gave you a 10 on this one.so very true, and very well written.

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Lady Grace 28 June 2009

if this is written wth sincerety, of course this is beautiful..grace

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Naidz Ladia 24 June 2009

i think i commented this poem already but i want to write again my wrds.I WIILL ALWAYS REMEMBER THE CONTENTS OF THIS POEM...THANKS IAN....naizz

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The Dreamer 16 June 2009

enjoyed very much - thank you

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Mariam Khan 13 June 2009

GREAT POEM THANKS FOR SHARING

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Shattered Soul 13 June 2009

very good read. interesting comparisons. i like it. :)

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