A Vixen’s Aspiration Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Vixen’s Aspiration

Rating: 4.8


vixen crawls mysteriously
around glassy gardens
jealous eye watches
so suspiciously

vixen screams loudly
to a blurry moon of July
there's no shelter for love
just a shadow of hunger dove

O lonely friend!
whose blanket
hugs your tonight?
why you're still frozen?

O lonely friend!
whom you declares
that devoted accent?
why there's no answers?

vixen runs strongly
into a cave of tragedy
some might say, that's okay
but a honest heart can't be folly

vixen climbs a hill of irony
nobody faults but desire surely
when you figures it out as density
I feel it's too late to pull it back, baby

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, C. P. Sharma)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

There is nothing worse than being toyed with then spurned-for some people LOVE is just a game-beware of the vixens-SHE FOXES-it's what's inside a person that counts-outer beauty fades....another ten for perception...

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Joseph Poewhit 25 March 2009

Powerful assets and dangerous, beauty and brains - [some comb]

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Chad Robinson 25 March 2009

A little gloomy, but just as good as the last one -8!

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Juan Carlos Abeti 25 March 2009

Sad poem indeed, but that does not eliminate its beauty.

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Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Wonderful poem of one tragic figure.

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C. P. Sharma 16 May 2009

Beautiful poem. Cleverly crafted. I wonder I deserve this dedication! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! However, thanks a lot. CP

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Indira Renganathan 04 April 2009

There is something missing in the last two stanzas that makes the poem a little vague and incomplete....good attempt

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Jim Norausky 03 April 2009

Some nice potic lines here. The penultimate line needs work. Jim

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Sebastine Humaemo 31 March 2009

A polite poignant write........loved the way lines moves on...............10++ sebastine

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Louis Rams 25 March 2009

it seems like a sad love story.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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