A Wait! Poem by Siddartha Montik

A Wait!

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and a long wait in,
wonder if I can sustain!

sure I know my sin,
as it is only my obcession!

Of course, I was helpless that I got in,
It was such a fall I never felt until I was in!


later all spellt my fate,
as much as I made a wrong feat!

don't even know where to find a help now,
as I believed only in my heart beats as they know!

It is still hard to believe that I ever was dishonest,
as much as I get this treat, as can never be any dearest!


I hope this wait brings me a sunshine,
of course I only have feable hopes as of it seems done!


copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Saturday, May 1, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 21 October 2016

Waiting is not an easy thing. Time and patience, have to bear too much.A thinking subject. I hope this wait brings me a sunshine, of course I only have feable hopes as of it seems done! .A glimmer of hope is seen from this part.

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Anwar Hussain Farooqui 12 November 2016

God hears who soulfully utter

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2016

Waiting for the sunshine! ! It will surely come. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A B Faniki 16 September 2019

Creative and brilliant. I love the imagery that you have penned. Thanks for sharing

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Bipasha D 30 January 2018

As long as you have hope this waiting is worthwhile... Warm regards, Bipasha

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Hope this wait brings sunshine..little hope is enough to sustain Rini

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Hope this wait brings sunshine..little hope is enough to sustain

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Randhir Kaur 28 April 2017

And a hope rejoices this verse. The fruit of patience is sweet. Beautiful message.

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Siddartha Montik 29 April 2017

Thank you Poet! !

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