A Wish Before Death Poem by kanav justa

A Wish Before Death

Rating: 5.0


Some sweet night, whilst death finds me
where on earth she be, and if she comes to see
For the last time her touch I will feel
Few pleasing moments from death I will steal
No matter how sore that death will be
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

Embraced within her herself, If she holds me
Gape her through her eyes, if bleak those eyes be
In that small a moment, my whole life I will live
I will ask for something, and wonder if she will give
For the last time, if those lips were near me
If she comes to me I will leave merrily

If my creased hands can move, only one place they will be
Her hands on mine, and only one thing I will see
If the changing time, will alter her whitish skin
For the last time, if my poor hands will win
If in her big eyes, I will still find me
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

I will look her in her eyes, I will look very deep
Just like these days, if she will make me sleep
If few more moments are found by me
In that small a time, I will exist for eternity
For the last time, if my name speaks she
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

Just like in my dreams, if she firmly clutches me
Tell her to come close, her face I will clearly see
For the last time, I will kiss lips of thee
Few blissful moments before my spirit gets free
Tasting sweet her lips, willingly I will flee
If she comes to me, I will leave merrily

But if some case be, if she will not hold me
No words if she speaks, and sits like a tree
For the last time, if she still doesn't see
She will still be a princess and I a small bee
And if her sweet voice is not heard by me
But since she comes to me, I will leave merrily

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neetha Sasidharan 17 January 2013

so coollll....grt poem...grt rhymes.....grt idea.....evrything is just grt....kp penning

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Valsa George 20 January 2013

Overflowing with such intense passion for your sweet heart! Your resolution to love her even if she doesn't turn up to have a last glance at you when you go away is the height of your selfless feel for her!

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Shahzia Batool 23 January 2013

Good comments on a good poem, the unpunctuated flow experiences no ebb, or obstruction anywhere...

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Yasmin Khan 18 May 2013

A few pleasing moments stolen from death you plan to spend with her and then leaving merrily in ecstasy.It's written with an emotional pen.

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Captain Cur 30 May 2013

A very personal poem excellently penned. Very moving and emotional.

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* Sunprincess * 11 July 2014

............honestly this is the best poem I read today....loved reading every single word of this sweet poem....

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 08 May 2014

Truly poetic and very well written.

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Amitava Sur 07 February 2014

A lovely poem with emotions which touches heart with nice flow of woeds

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Bijay Poudel 01 January 2014

Made my day...wat a beauty! ! !

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 December 2013

A brilliant poem. To sum it up in a few words, I may say it is a 'Taj Mahal 'of verse

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