I am a particular man in a particular moment,
Next moment I'm changed, still a man but different,
Confined in a nation of a broken continent,
O earth! I imagine you as a singular piece of land.
World, an ocean polarized in a paradise and the hell,
Virgin dreams resting in a single ocean like a shell,
Most of them empty but a few with a precious pearl,
O man! A diver, on the earth you could not stand.
A tiring diving, watching a twilight and exhausting glow,
Sitting on a beach and watching the passing show,
The shells in my hands aren't empty, I know,
O God! These narrate a love story of sea and the land.
I was a frustrated man but with the sunset I am changed,
The rising moon says on the stars your success is hanged,
Success comes in cycles black hole will be big banged,
O Nature! When you'll please with a pearl, my right hand?
A shining pearl with a glace that will beautify the earth,
The separated continents will be united for the worth,
That everyone dreams, a love enforced by a lovely zearth,
O Love! God isn't interested, why don't you understand?
No Answer, dejected and frustrated slowly I move to my hut,
A beautiful sweetheart standing on the doors that aren't shut,
A woman replies all questions but she lives in a hard nut,
A beauty in stanzas, each and every line let me expand.
A beautiful poem of love and life that perceives earth as a singular piece of land- undivided, of a single ocean, of nature holding pearls in her pretty hands and the joy of the sight of your sweet heart waiting at the door. A splendid poem, Akhtar Sahab.......10
CONGRATULATIONS! A lovely poem is chosen as the poem of the day. Already I have reviewed this poem poem earlier.
A lovely poem of the day. Congrats, sir Akhtar on your featured piece...10+++
In the opening stanza alone, a reader would be smitten by the deep and powerful thoughts the great Poet had imparted. THe last stanza.depicts women's role in society with a note of their wonderdul attribute that despite of their status in society women are not suppressed to speak for love and truth. A beautifully crafted poem imbued with insight. Onto my Poem List. Congratulations , Sir for a well deserved accolade.
Another magnificent poem from the pen of a great Poet and thinker. A sterling piece of poetry that touches on so many issues with a great message of unity and love. The mingling of nature with beautiful thoughts and verses create more impact in the reader's mind.
Lovely poem on vision of love and Unity for mankind. It is further nice to know that women can supply the answers and take us closer to these cherished goals of mankind. Congratulations Akhtarji for this member poem place.
Congratulations sir, Verily love would have a different meaning if all continents were one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Success comes in cycles and black hole will be big banged. Everything wonder happens in nature and creation. There is no need to get frustration seeing sunset as new sunrise is waiting for us next day. With much eagerness and greatness rising moon talks to stars. A beautiful sweetheart is standing on the doors and narrating the beauty of each stanza perceived with great beauty of love ad humanity. An excellent poem is very well penned...10