A Woman Speaks Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

A Woman Speaks

Rating: 3.3


A thousand flowers sprout in the bosom
The dreams of the years gone now subdued
In the wake of reality that descends
Like waves after waves on the shore

Many colors and hues now dried
The color of the rainbow appearing dull
Which once was a fairy tale
To change the gender it was once said
Cross over the rainbow

The desire was not a deal as bad
Only raised and not loved in the world
So dominant by the other gender

The uncertainty of future with its dragon teeth
Love’s mast is the only way to sail
Through the murky waters

Having loved then for years and years
The lover, the husband, brother and son
Still in search of recognition of my love
In the man’s hand is my piece of bread

In the world of natural selection
When survival of the fittest is the rule
Braved have I the way for a living in harmony
Carry not I the gun nor do I have a doctrine

Who shall then fight for my freedom forbidden
Love is the last hope as the trees and vegetables
Only that I shed tears and sighs of the brutality
The civilization has dawned on me my destruction

Greater is the temptation for when I am hungry
Sell my body or what do I give in legacy
To the younger little girls who look at me
For inspiration when love stands abandoned

Rise women of the world for let’s change the destiny
Of our lives and future and not to be consumed
By hollow words of love without any meaning
18/9/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ershad Mazumder 08 October 2008

Very good theme. Very good feeling.But not that much poetic I expected.Poetry is simple like beauty. Read more and more of Ghalib

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

'Rise women of the world for let’s change the destiny Of our lives and future and not to be consumed By hollow words of love without any meaning' Wonderful job is done,10 for it.

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Dear poet SadiqullahIn, you have a brave voice telling sharply the truth ('in man’s hand is my piece of bread) and the revolutionary declaration ('Rise women, change the destiny') . Further. I believe that Peace in the 21st century will be a case in the hands of women. I give you a 10. Go on with same poems to change planet's fate! Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Rakhi Jayashankar 26 September 2008

being a woman i would like to tell you that your work is simply a presentation of woman not bold enough. Excepting the fact that some women have com through the whole way of thrones to success there are stil a great majority who found it difficult to overcome the struggles in the male dominated soceity

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 26 September 2008

When a woman speaks, a man has to listen to. Really a man knows the needs of a woman. Sometimes he forgets his needs as well as hers. This poem is a tribute to a woman, but it is an urging to a man, too.

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Chinedu Dike 13 July 2022

Wonderful rendition elegantly crafted with conviction. An insightful creation

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2017

Having loved then for years and years The lover, the husband, brother and son Still in search of recognition of my love In the man’s hand is my piece of bread //.... Great poem reflecting the hypocrisy of our male dominated society and the real status of woman through the ages. This poem is a favourite of mine now. Thanks.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 November 2014

Powerful piece. Thanks for standing in solidarity with those who suffer, especially the case of women in our world.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 July 2010

‘Love’s mast is the only way to sail/Through the murky waters’ ~ Brilliant lines …are sparkling in mist world with kaleidoscopic velour…wiping out all pallor ‘Rise women of the world for let’s change the destiny…’ we women always on our ‘Highs’ but time immemorial gender bias well all you know… congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Mamta Agarwal 04 December 2008

a very compassionate poem speaking on behalf of women. its a man's world, and all the education, financial independence and multi tasking not much has changed in the male dominated society. 10 please read Celebrating Women's day and Dare to dream if you find time- same theme from a women's perspective. Mamta

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