Your Sweet Presence Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Your Sweet Presence

Rating: 3.4

The day when you were standing in front of me
And when I just because of sheer excitement
Of being close to you and having faced you
When suddenly I felt that some spirit has possessed me
And when I felt you were much taller than me
And the colors of you ‘pairahan’
Those red lips and white cheeks
The sparkling teeth
My submission of talking to you
That I was in love with you
Not love
But that I liked you
Though I loved you
Because by that time
I did not know that you will honor the word
May be I was not generous enough
I should have gone with the flow
The flow of your beauty
And your sparkling shining teeth
That expression of amazement
At my confession
The confession of love
And likeness
To me
You were like an angel
To a lover
Many lovers would have felt
The same way
As I did
While talking to you
And then
When you were no more
I was left with my imagination
And the memories
Of your sweet presence

Callie Valentine 21 April 2009

What a wonderful poem! It's touching, and sweet in a way that's not over-done. Lovely.

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Naidz Ladia 25 May 2009

this is written in a sweet manner..very nice..naizz

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Kesav Easwaran 05 August 2008

memories written sweet of the presense of a beauty in her absence...subtly romantic...sparkling teeth... why appear twice? ten grade

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Reshma Ramesh 04 December 2008

your sweet presence is an amazing poem......wanting the readers more of this story...10!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 July 2009

oh lovely verses.................10+

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Captain Cur 20 August 2017

This poem commemorates beautiful thoughts and feeling at the time of your meeting in her sweet presence. Wonderfully done!

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Ramesh T A 20 August 2017

Glad to read your nice romantic poem, my friend! Congratulations for selecting yours as member poem today!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2017

Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory; Odours, when sweet violets sicken, Live within the sense they quicken. Rose leaves, when the rose is dead, Are heap'd for the belovèd's bed; And so thy thoughts, when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on.............Shelley Congrats your lovely poem broght back another lovely poem by by Shelley. A sweet presnce is never forgotten and it remains in the memory for ever.

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2017

Lovely poem Sadiq.. Congratulations

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Richard Wlodarski 20 August 2017

Tragically beautiful. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Sadiqullah!

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