Abandoned Courtyard Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Abandoned Courtyard

Rating: 5.0


Half-shaded in the afternoon
The marbled floor smudged
By the acacia shadow
Awaits the summer breeze
Slowly winding through the twigs
Swishing the dead yellow leaves
Prostrate on the floor
Silence sweeps the yard
With force of a hurricane
Trees answer in monosyllables
As no footsteps cross the threshold
Of ego between the gate
And the window.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2022

Trees answer in monosyllables.... fascinating expression. Appreciated this magnificent poem. Top score!

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Superb poem. The mood of a lost ‘world' created most emphatically and effectively. The flow of metaphors and tropes makes the elegantly powerful. Truly Nosheenic. Loved it. Top score and myfav

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Sandra Feldman 28 November 2022

Carried away by the poetic and perfect pictorial sentiments in tour description. Even, an abandoned courtyard becomes alive come from such a talented pen and poetic transmission. Well deserved poem of te day, sincere congratulations.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2022

A well crafted poem with crystalline images.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 November 2022

'Silence sweeps the yard', wonderful words of a beautiful poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2022

Only a true poet/poetess can add visual beauty to an abandoned courtyard...and make the poem sublime. Heartiest of Congrats on such a very well deserved POD, Nosheen!

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David Wood 28 November 2022

Just superb Norsheen. Top matks…

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Savita Tyagi 28 November 2022

Marvelous poem. Silence sweeps the yard with force of hurricane….so happy to read it as member poem on front page.

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This poem is the POD Member today. This poem, sure, deserves the honour. Actually, PoemHunter is honoured by featuring this gem!

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One of the best poems of Nosheen. One of the best I have ever read!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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