Abnormality Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Abnormality

Rating: 5.0


I came to the drooping scent of wine,
touched beard and mustache,
was blind in the nearest shining of the sun,
earthworm dug earth under feet,
I felt the coolness and heard sniggering of quean,
thought learned I'm only on these ladies eyes,
kept ataxic gait
through the lane of myself
at last
endless end
did not find me…


2018/Chattogram

Friday, August 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2020

A well crafted composition. Truly exceptional.....10+++

5 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 August 2020

Wandering all in thought will take you to places which are beyond reach. Nicely thought.10++

5 0 Reply
Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 August 2020

I like your poetic comments on all my poems stay at it mb

4 0 Reply
Varsha M 21 August 2020

A right choice and a right guide always go together and vice versa also true. Need to be sensible while choosing. Good work

4 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success