Abortion Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

I love reading your Poems, though it seems more like Poetry, beautiful! I only wish I could write more poetry. I'm just not good at reading the meanings behind it, I have difficulty in understanding, it takes great talent to do something like that. Please read and rate my poem on an Unborn Child, it is also on abortion.

i see what you are trying to say in this poem, truthfully it is a good poem, but by playing with the words, you can make it more stronger. Keep it up

very realistict it mirrors what is happening in the present! keep it up!

Simple and intense I like it

Its succinctness felt like a very sharp knife suddenly ending a very fragile life and left me momentarily stunned: therefore it has done its job extremely well. I don't like to rate works of art - that's Simon Cowell territory: -)

Over excited you say.Would have been a good flower.

Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!

This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.

This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!

simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.