Above From The Deep Poem by Unwritten Soul

Above From The Deep

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Above from the deep
Taller than the sky wall
We shall pluck the sun
Embracing all shines in our arm
Bring it back into the ground
Brightening dark deep down
A Light for our dreams to grow
Above from the deep

Let the shine in their eyes staring
Upon me holding something
In my hand without a thing
Because only my eyes knowing
The existence of what i am holding
The invisible dream that i dream

Own my heart as whole
Forever it will be placed in my hand
Coated with my every strength
With all trust i lay in this palm
For invisible dream to survive

Just like a farmer without a land
Only in my heart for seeds to grow
Waiting for wake up from long sleep
In a while we witnessing the flowing wind
Moving with the time, roll the clock wheels
Then we watching days changing to years
Observing the hopeless grass grow taller

The shine in their eyes intriguing
Of my invisible seed surfaced by the dust
Layers of ashes bury it deeper from above
In my hand, i still holding, i still believing
The strength and trust i keep holding
For a small wish one day will growing

Above from the deep
Fertilizing with trial and error
Usual watering without surrender
Above from the deep
Raising hand from below
The green hopes finally crawling out
In ambient of different calling to wake up
Above from the deep
The sun still waiting for this new born
Touch them up to reach higher as they can go
Higher and taller above
Above from this deep

I just like a farmer without a land
But seeding dreams without discriminating
Of which seeds I should choose and growing
To pick only the best one to grow, No oh No
As my heart says grow all, their potential we don't hold
So i will grow all without discriminating
Even I am only a farmer without a land

One sweet day i smell something sweet
From a garden of my soul
The growing plant i seed once
with tears and hardness i witnessed
Harvest from sweet sacrifice
Turn for joy and happiness
For reality now in same line
Side by side walk with me

Above from this deep
Sweat and tears dropp to my feet
I smell the existence of my ripen dream fruit
Yet if i grow all dreams i shall have many
Of diverse tastes and colorful flowers
So i told the seed and land, my heart of no land farmer
Believe your self to go above, get brighter
Even you cant, don't go deeper, it's darker

So take care of what you dream
Just matter of time to tell you when
For one day it will go above
Higher, reaching from this deep
Above from this deep

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This is a poem that i write for one of my friend here, that finally
found the strength after many times feel down for uncertainty time
I'm so proud to see how great smile can bounce back to that innocent heart.I know we dream many things in our life, sometimes we can reach sometimes we cant but never abandon what we have start, seed them with try...maybe for others our dream is a small but in our eyes that is what we wanted for, so chase what you want to do...we may not have it now, seed takes years to grow as a strong tree, some even to sprout takes years to get favorable condition....I never agree
for whom said, pick the best seed or seedling...sometimes the weaker one could be stronger and better, it changes through time, like our life we become better..we learn to survive, so give any chance to anyone and dream to grow and proves as what they really are...and for a dream we dream we will enjoy a fruit imagine if we dream of different, we may have many types of fruits/flower just if we seed and care them....but dream without try and care it is hopeless...
It's a dream in a dream...For my friend who knows that this is for you, you have fallen many times, cry deeply and now i am glad you find a shineSo go my dear friend, for everyone Go above from the deep...you will smile, For all..LOve_Unwritten Soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Black On Black Arts 20 July 2012

this friend of your is fortunate to have you you put your soul in it

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Thoughts Of A Poet 06 August 2012

Above from the deep Fertilizing with trial and error Usual watering without surrender Above from the deep Raising hand from below The green hopes finally crawling out In ambient of different calling to wake up Above from the deep The sun still waiting for this new born Touch them up to reach higher as they can go Higher and taller above Above from this deep that line is so sad

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Lyn Paul 25 August 2012

Your writing is so calming. Thank you for sharing this.

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Lyn Paul 25 August 2012

I loved this. Your writing is so calming. Thank you for sharing this.

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Castellenas John 05 April 2019

A wonderful poem shared. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

One sweet day i smell something sweet From a garden of my soul The growing plant i seed once with tears and hardness i witnessed Harvest from sweet sacrifice Turn for joy and happiness For reality now in same line Side by side walk with me Above from this deep Sweat and tears dropp to my feet I smell the existence of my ripen dream fruit... great theme. Effort doesn't go in vain. If we seed seeds properly with care it must gives us results. Dream for future is best but dream without try and care is fruitless. Dear madam, this poem is a best inspiration not only to your that particular friend but also to all friends.

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Unwritten Soul 14 September 2017

Maybe i get my inspiration for a friend, but as i shared it now belong to whoever want to keep it...because i cant force people to adopt my idea, but i can share what is my observation and idea...I am glad if you like it and find it as good inspiration, i feel honored by your kindness and nice words :) thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2016

From the deep. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Christopher Tye 25 August 2016

Really great poem, one of your best. So much imagery and lots to ponder and think about.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2016

Above from the deep Fertilizing with trial and error Usual watering without surrender Above from the deep Raising hand from below The green hopes finally crawling out In ambient of different calling to wake up Above from the deep The sun still waiting for this new born Touch them up to reach higher as they can go- - - a beautiful poem written for your friend asking your friend to be determined to achieve the goal come what may with so many examples and a wonderful way of introducing your theme...... let this poem give life to so many.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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